A very un-put-together writing update; also, being a slow writer is valid

I wasn’t actually going to post anything today, because my mental health decided to take up extreme sports and go cliff diving (and also I didn’t have a post written up anyway), but then I realized I wanted to post something. So here it is.

(Oh, also my computer broke. And I mean straight-up disintegrated. I can still turn it on and stuff, but it’s not looking good. Thankfully, my sister is letting me use her old laptop. It’s a little bit finicky, but other than that it works fine, so I’m able to still write and stuff. Just…that’s my go-to excuse if I miss any posts now. 😉 )

I haven’t written very much at all this year month, and that’s okay. Honestly. I’m pretty impressed that I managed to get all the stuff done that I did. 4k words written this month! Whoo! (1k of that was spent working on my fanfic, 3k on my novel.) I’m not sure I’ll continue with NaNoWriMo, though, because as I said, mental health, but it has been pretty fun.

It’s okay to write slower than everyone else. I kind of wish I could be a fast writer–I’d like to be able to get all my project ideas completed in a reasonable time. I like working on different stories! But writing slowly means I’ll be able to spend a lot of time with the current projects that I love. And frankly, I’m only *checks* 8606 words into this novel, but I’m already dreading having to end this project, like the sentimental freak I am. Be proud of how much you’ve written, even if you’ve only written a sentence.

Hold up, I’m 8606 words in? Twenty-nine pages?! I’m further in than I thought!

Does anyone else get it where if they go three days without writing or something they immediately start feeling like they aren’t even a writer anymore and they get really ashamed? Because I do that, and it’s a bit ridiculous.

Maybe I fall into a trap of needing to make a wordcount in order to feel like I’ve achieved anything?

I was having trouble getting through this one chapter in my novel, and I promised myself that when I was done with this I would post snippets. That did not help me break through the writer’s block, and I’m not even done with this chapter yet, but I still want to post snippets from this chapter. (Incidentally, I broke the writer’s block by including a scene in between the two chapters from another character’s point of view–Guinevere’s, in case you’re interested–but also getting a certain little word counter thingy called NaNoWriMo helped too. Sometimes all you need to push you through is to break up your rhythm a little.)

But now I need to find snippets that aren’t trash.

Or maybe I’ll post trashy snippets! Why should I only show the semi-decent aspects of myself!

I tried my very best to smile. She grinned back at me. She looked more like a tiger baring her teeth. But she did not look unhandsome.

Written at twelve in the morning and…I do not?? know where this came from?? WHY IS THIS HERE.

By the way, as you can tell, I have finally beat the desire to go back and edit. every. scene as soon as I’m done. I’m fine with editing by the chapter, but if I edit by the scene it’s waaay too easy for me to just decide ‘this whole thing is trash and isn’t going anywhere’ and toss it. For me personally I need to wait until I’ve at least got a chapter down.


“Your condolences are appreciated,” I said drily. The corners of her mouth tilted up.

Okay, I kind of like this.

A smile grew over her face that we both knew she did not mean at all. It was not that it was unconvincing. It was only that we both knew. “I am Queen Guinevere,” she murmured, leaning forward. She looked as if she were admitting something mildly embarrassing.

I really like this.

Her hand jerked, the light flickering as it moved, and she stared at me with an intensity that made me uncomfortable. “Really?” she said. “Gawain’s little brother?” I had never thought of myself as ‘Gawain’s little brother’ in my life.

I don’t know why, but one of my absolute favorite things is having characters in an extremely dysfunctional/otherwise bad situation and then just have them treat it like it’s completely normal. I don’t know why.

She was a tall woman, taller than me, and her brown skin was dry and the skin on her hands were cracked. But it was her eyes I couldn’t look away from. Her eyes were endless and ancient and dead. There were dark hollows underneath them like she hadn’t slept in weeks.

Does someone want to crown me queen of sexy character descriptions or what? That is sarcasm, by the way. Literally no one should want to crown me queen of sexy character descriptions.

But I’m kind of sick of sexy character descriptions anyway. Screw your emerald eyes, Warner! (Okay sorry jk we love your emerald/jade/whatever eyes. Even though they’re ridiculous. NO ONE ELSE GETS A PASS THOUGH.)

Does anyone else type their characters to things way too much? Hogwarts house, colour, whatever that weird personality-type-thing-of-debatable-scientific-accuracy was (MBTI. It was MBTI), etc. I don’t know why I like doing it, I just do.

Mordred’s a Slytherin with a dash of Hufflepuff, I think. Agravaine is…I don’t know, but it’s not Slytherin. BRB gonna go waste my time doing some stupid quiz again. (According to the knockoff Pottermore quiz I took, he’s a tie between Gryffindor and…Hufflepuff?! Nah I’m not buying this I think he’s just outside the Harry Potter house system. He has no house. Gryffindor might be a fit, though.) Guinevere is certainly Slythern. Just in case anyone was interested, which you weren’t.

On a complete and total side note, why on earth are Ravenclaw and Slytherin separate houses? Sure, there is a difference between cunning and general intelligence, but…if you’re intelligent, don’t you also have the capacity to strategize? And you might say that it’s the difference between intelligence for its own sake and intelligence for the sake of ambition–to get you a job, to help you succeed–but those often go hand in hand. I, for one, love writing for its own sake, but I would also very much like to be published and make money one of these days. I don’t know, I just don’t understand.

Oh, weird thing I realized the other day about my story: I tend to imagine my characters with the same accent as me, as if any sixth century British character would ever have the same accent as a fairly accentless American, but you know, Mordred and his brothers are, technically, from Scotland I guess. So I finally looked up what a Scottish accent sounded like, and now I…I can’t get the accent out of my head? I’m thinking in a Scottish accent? Send help?

Also. I studiously avoid writing dialect because I just have this sense that giving the characters a way of speaking exactly like my own is still less offensive than butchering whatever the characters’ dialects are. (And I mean dialect as in speaking patterns, not dialect as in doing bizarre things with your spelling. No one should butcher any spelling here, and you’re probably getting it wrong anyway, 19th century authors. Whoops, did this just turn into a callout post?) Has anyone had to research these sorts of things, and how did you do it? How do you fight the fear that you’re butchering everything that is sacred and you now have an army of angry…Scottish people in this case I guess at your door? I don’t want an army of angry Scottish people at my door! England already tried that!

And hey, I still probably wouldn’t bother with ‘accurate’ speech patterns in this case, because hello it is historical and if I were to be truly accurate no one would be able to understand me. Let us translate this novel from ancient Welsh.

Oh! I also started a fanfic for a show you’ve probably never heard of (unless you read my last blog post), but I’m going to tell you about the fanfic anyway! So there’s Seonho, who is an extremely ridiculous character, from this Korean drama called My Country, which is an extremely ridiculous show. I love it, of course. Anyway, the show (spoilers if you’re actually interested in watching it, just warning you) fridged the hero’s sister, which kind of annoys me, considering I liked the sister very much. So now I’m just over here writing a Seonho/Yeon AU. Where, you know, they escape from evil dad and everything. And I have no idea what direction this is going to take, but I have lots of extremely stupid ideas. But hey! At least I can’t outdo the show in stupidity!

(If I ever do outdo the show in stupidity, please send me help. And also maybe kill me, because that’s a state I don’t want to be in.)

I’ve got five pages of fanfic so far! Yay!

So, uh…snippets?

“Of course,” he said. His smile grew still more uneven. He always had that nervous smile whenever he lied to her. “I always make it out alive, don’t I?” He looked to the side, the smile beginning to slip off his face.

I’ll admit, I kind of love these morons.

She used to have nightmares about losing Seonho.

She would wander and wander through the house and the courtyard, but the rooms would be empty. The house was abandoned. Except for Nam Jeon. She never saw him, but Nam Jeon would always be there.

She’d wake up terrified each time, but Seonho was always there in the morning, a tired smile on his face. She never knew about the future, though. She would never know about that.

Idk if it’s any good I guess you decide

She ran ahead to keep up. “You’re injured.”

“It’s very thoughtful of you to care,” he said kindly, inclining his head. She rolled her eyes.

“We’re likely to get caught if you collapse, orabeoni,” she said, nudging his shoulder without thinking about it. He hissed in a breath. “I’m sorry,” she said.

I really hate how WordPress formats my quotes? It looks ugly, and I can’t figure out how to change it. Does anyone have any advice for this? I also can’t figure out how to change the color of a few words without changing the entire paragraph. Am I technology-clueless or is WordPress?

But anyway, let’s be proud of our writing. 💙 And I’m sorry that this post is way too long for what it is. It’s not a very good post, but that’s sort of the point. Stuff straight from our brains doesn’t necessarily make a very good post, but they’re certainly satisfying to write. I’ll try to get out a more polished post next Saturday, but I certainly make no promises.

Behind the Blogger Tag

Jenelle tagged me for this! And I appreciate it, too, because I haven’t been getting a lot of sleep/feeling great mentally in general, which makes writing blog posts kind of hard. And tags are both easy and fun, which is the perfect combination for anything, especially when you’re running low on sleep. I’m beginning to feel better as far as my mood–please let that last and not be a one-day thing–but seriously, I don’t think I’ve gotten a good night’s sleep this week. >_<

Also, this is the first tag I’ve ever done, so…*soft cheer*



  • Thank the person who nominated you! . . .  Thank you, Jenelle! Love your blog!
  • Answer all the questions down below!
  • Pingback to the creator of the tag . . . This would be Ellyn@AllonsyThornraxx 
  • Nominate 5+ bloggers who you’d like to know more about to do this tag! . . .  So, I have no idea who has done this tag already and who hasn’t. Whoops.

1. Why did you start blogging and why have you kept blogging?

Uh…It’s been literally two months, and I’ve forgotten this already? How?

I’m pretty sure I wanted a place where I can talk all I want about fairy tales and Arthurian legend without annoying my family members by jabbering on ceaselessly? I didn’t actually expect to talk about books as much as I do on this blog, but I should have. I can’t even go a day in real life without talking about stories. Whether I annoy my family members or not.

2. What is your favorite type of blog post to write?

I don’t actually know. I love writing about fairy tales. I loved posting a short story online, although it might not be something I do often. I love posting analyses of different legends and things, but those are hard to write.

3. What are your Top Three favorite blog posts?

Ooh! I like this question. And it’s not that hard to answer, because I don’t have that many posts yet. So, let’s see, in order:

Sepideh and the Jinni–An Aladdin Short Story
My first time putting a story out into the big wide world, and it honestly felt really good. And I love the characters? They’ll probably always hold a special place in my heart, even if I do go back a year later and go, ‘OH MY GOSH I THOUGHT THAT WAS GOOD.’ Also my first time retelling anything Aladdin-related. First times are always nice.


The fairy tale has a special place in my heart, and so the blog post does, too.

As for third, I’d say it’s tied between

Mordred and Guinevere


Le Morte D’Arthur

The first is an analysis of a weird and not-usually-analyzed thing that happened in the early Arthurian legends (aka Guinevere and Mordred hooking up/Guinevere going full-on villainess), and the second is both the first blog post I ever did and an introduction to the series I ended up doing, in which I post chapters of Le Morte D’Arthur with my commentary. Is either post well-written? Nah. Did I love writing them? Yes.

I do feel like the post on Mordred and Guinevere was a bit all over the place, though. (And that was after my sister helped me edit it.) But seriously, I do love analyzing things. Especially these two trash-fire characters. Although I…Honestly, maybe I should just do a whole ‘nother post on my complex feelings on this topic, because I did not do a good job explaining them in that article. Honestly, I don’t even know what my feelings about this are. Whatever they are, they’re complicated enough to probably fill up a blog post, and I won’t bore you with them here.

And on a side note, I still can’t figure out what it is with characters in Arthurian legend getting together with their nephew-in-law? Why is this a thing?

Also. I LOVE THAT CARTOON I DID OF GUINEVERE OH MY GOSH. But I can’t get it to a point where it does not look fuzzy when I size the picture down and that makes me sad. (also, can anyone even read my handwriting? I can read it, but can anyone else? I am actually not sure. My…my lettering is awful.)

4. What are some of your favorite things to do to relax?

  1. Blogging
  2. Napping

I have a thrilling life, you guys. But I also take walks to help me relax? So that counts.

5. What are three of your favorite things?

My computer, my books, and Microsoft Word. #deep

6. What are your proudest blogging moments?

I haven’t been blogging for very long, but I love whenever someone comments on my posts, and I loved getting positive feedback on my short story. Thank you, guys 🖤

7. What are your hobbies outside of blogging?

Well, writing isn’t really a hobby so much as a soul-sucking passion that scoops you out from the inside and dumps it all on the page. At least for me. Usually. Drawing would probably be more of a hobby for me; I draw occasionally, and it’s a light pastime, except I feel like a hobby should cause less gaping insecurities. I guess the closest answer would be sewing, but I’ll be honest, I haven’t been sewing much at all this year.

8. Describe your personality in three words.

Uh. This is harder than it should be.

Multifaceted, complex, indescribable-in-three-words. There.

9. What are your top three pet peeves?

Ooh! When a TV show or movie or whatever is set in a historical era, but all the actors conform 101% to modern-day beauty standards. Look up pictures of that TV show The Tudors, okay? Those characters are supposed to be Henry VIII

and Anne Boleyn,

and other characters from that time period. I haven’t watched the show, so I can’t comment on the quality of their acting, but would it have killed them to have a slightly fat Henry VIII? An Anne Boleyn that didn’t look like a modern prom queen? And you probably could have kept the same actors and just styled them in a way that made them look less glaringly modern. Why would styling the actress for Anne as a more mature-looking, slightly older woman make her less attractive? I find that portrait of Anne Boleyn incredibly beautiful.

Karolina Zebrowska, a youtuber who has a channel on historical fashion, pointed out that, in the 1995 adaptation of Pride and Prejudice, the actress for Jane doesn’t necessarily conform to all of today’s beauty standards (although I personally find her looks amazing), but she looks exactly like she stepped out of a painting from the Regency time period. And do I feel pulled out of the story each time I look at her? Not at all!

Anyway, time to end the screed, it’s not like my books are historically accurate at all. I HAVE NO HIGH GROUND, OBI-WAN. What else do I find annoying?

Oh yes! Packaging that is IMPOSSIBLE TO OPEN. Not only did the company want to deter thieves, they also wanted to deter any and all customers. Their products are not meant for the unworthy.

Also people in medieval movies who don’t wear a veil or cover their hair at all for some reason. But I promised I wouldn’t start up again with the historical accuracy screed.

10. What’s something your followers don’t know about you?

Okay, firstly…Becky is actually a pen name. It all kind of started as a joke? See, my extended family got my name wrong when writing an obituary. My name is absolutely nothing like Becky. We don’t see that side of the family very much, so I guess that’s why it happened (Facebook is a click away, guys. Just saying). So, my mom and I were laughing about it at the time and saying that I should take up Becky as a pen-name, and once I decided to start this blog, I asked Mom if I should use my real name or a pen name for this, and Mom joked about calling myself Becky. And thus Becky came to be.

And I should probably clarify (before you think I’m a sociopath or something lol lol that’s DEFINITELY not true) that my mom was really sad about the death, but my family tends to joke a lot, probably to make ourselves feel better in situations like that.

And another thing, I feel like usually I’m a pretty upbeat person on this blog, but in real life I can be pretty negative at times? It’s not necessarily always an awful quality, but I can get into states where I feel like everything I do is bad. Which is obviously not good.


Okay, time to tag people! I’m not sure if I can get it to five, because I’m pretty sure a lot of people have done this already…I think? Hopefully I don’t tag anyone who’s already done it.




H. S. Kylian

And you. Seriously, literally anyone else who wants to do this can go on and steal this tag! The pirate job application forms can be found at the front desk.

Now let’s just all sit and pray that I actually remember to notify the people I tagged. Um.